Second Draft Newspaper Advert

When I finally got the idea I had in mind into work, I felt it is not good enough to my own satisfaction.

However i decided to ask target audience about what they thought about the advert. I received reply saying:

• "I would not take no action on the poster"
• "It does not actually fancy my interest"
• "I don't get what it is trying to tell me"

With all the negative replies I got from my target audience, I knew the advert is not the best advert i could design. I have made a conclusion deciding to make another draft of a newspaper advert.